Kim Prime - Emo Superpowered bitch who shouts awful dialogue
Kim 1 - Disney Kim
Kim 2 - Fangirl Lesbian Kim
Kim 3 - Black Kim - I'm picturing a fro
Kim 4 - Masked Vigilante Kim - Are you dense? Are you retarded? I’m the goddamned Kim Possible!
Kim 5 - Middle-aged Housewife Kim
Kim 12 - Allied Forces WWII Kim
Kim 21 - Axis Power Nazi Kim
Kim 26 - Overly Aggressive Kim - Probably a post-tortured version of Kim 1, maybe had her tits sliced off or something
Kim 31 - Fail Kim - Couldn’t save a kid, turned alchie
Kim 34 - Slut Kim
Kim 47 - RoboKim
Kim 50 - Cowgirl Kim
Kim 51 - Medieval Kim - Probably a Joan of Arc type
Kim 52 - Feudal Japan Kim - Geisha or Samurai though...hmmm...
Kim 63 - Ken Possible
Kim 70 - Dyke Kim - Butch hair, standard dyke attire, probably hooked with Tara, to be debated later
Kim 77- Steampunk Kim - Victorian Kim with steampunk gadgets
Kim 0 - Quadriplegic Kim
Kim 82 - Speedster Kim - Probably related to that episode with those knock off Sonic sneakers
Kim 99 - Unnerved Kim - Suffers from schizophrenia, sadly, based on my own fanfiction
Kim 99B - Alternate Personality Kim - Psycho who believes that removing free will from people with mind control chips will bring about world peace
sadly, this is part of my current work
Kim 100 - Ron Kim - Sidekick Kim
Kim 111 - Stark Kim - A rich douche who does the hero thing for fun
Kim 115 - Kim Pool - Insane and really f*ugly
Kim 193- Kim Possible in Embryonic stage
Kim 666 - Apocalypse Kim - Either nuclear fall out or last survivor of earth deal

>>2225
Kim 99 - Unnerved Kim - Suffers from schizophrenia, sadly, based on my own fanfiction
Kim 99B - Alternate Personality Kim - Psycho who believes that removing free will from people with mind control chips will bring about world peace
Kim 100 - Ron Kim - Sidekick Kim
Kim 111 - Stark Kim - A rich douche who does the hero thing for fun
Note: Needs to be a real douche, only fights crime on her down time, usually by seeing something on the news and dragging Ron with her to go save the day and grab some glory. Armored suit is probably most likely here.
Kim 115 - Kim Pool - Insane and really f*ugly
Kim 123 - Dominatrix Kim - The /d/ of Kim
Kim 140 - Jungle Queen Kim
Kim 143 - Buccaneer Kim
Kim 146 - Gladiatrix Kim
Kim 150 - Prohibition Era Rum Runner Kim
Kim 155 - Centaur Kim
Kim 156 - Kitten Kim
Kim 159 - Sam Spade Kim - Overly stereotyped detective Kim

>>2229
We gotta include a rum runner kim. Just cause I'd love to see her in a 20's suit.

As a strange thought... Black Kim's Drakken is Red, and her Shego Yellow.

>>2231
no, Shego is Whitey. Since black Kim is Blacksplotation, Shego has the be a honkey authority figure, maybe even all white skin

>>2232
"Kim Possible, you think your SUPA BAD, but your not fly!"

>>2233
"Soon, I will flood all ghettos with crack cocaine and crush the spirit of the black community!"

>>2234
And the "Shika shikka boo, boo sha" now has a complex handshake involved.

Holy cow, these are all pretty spot on reinterpretations. I salute your effort and wish you well on whatever this is supposed to become.

>>2237
A crisis of infinite Kims.

Kim prime punched something, realities collapsed in on themselves, now everybody's gotta take down KP. She killed Centaur Kim and Kitty Kim!

>>2239
I gotta think Kitty Kim would be first and by accident. Kim Prime just steps on her and that gets Centaur Kim mad

How do I miss all of these threads where everyone's being all creative-like?

Super-Soldier Kim - A government meta warrior who has been enhanced with technology and chemical treatment. The chemical treatment has given her a muscular build and caused her to grow to eight feet in height. There was originally a backstory, but I think it would be best to throw that out and keep it as simple as possible. She can serve as cannon fodder for Kim Prime to demonstrate her power.

>>2242
You know, I've read this in the other thread and now reading it again, I can only think of one thing; Bane Kim. "I will break you!"

>>2244
I like it. Let's go with that.

Okay so, big question- Kim Prime; Kryptonian or Power suit?

>>2246
Kryptonian with a power suit.

>>2247
okay, that 1 vote for her to be Krypton's native daughter. First to 5 votes wins

i vote krypton kim
Also we need black night kim(holy grail)
also we need a snikit bub kim

bump

Ok, here's the Shegos so far
Shego 1 - Disney Shego
Shego 2 - DA Lesbian Shego
Shego 3 - White villain in a Blacksplotation film
Shego 4 - Crazed Criminal Shego - Why so serious, princess?
Shego 5 - Overworked Middle-aged Business Woman or Bree Van De Camp Shego
Shego 12 - Soviet KGB Shego - It’s alright Kim American, it’s natural to be jealous of a hat this sexy or Nazi S.S. Shego
Shego 21 - Allied Resistance Shego
Shego 26 - Mob Boss Shego or Docile Shego - Completely Mindfucked after Overly Aggressive Kim got her revenge
Shego 31 - WHORES Shego - Street walker or Fail Shego - Retired, sees no point in a world without the challenge of Kim and also Alchie
Shego 34 - Rule 34 Shego or Pimp Shego
Shego 47 - Droidsmith Shego
Shego 50 - Outlaw Shego
Shego 51 - Inquisition Shego - Battle nun?
Shego 52 - Honorless Ronin Shego..
Shego 63 - Green Hego/ShaunGo
Shego 70 - Dyke Shego - Short and spunky hair, maybe pro-gay activist
or Christian Conservative Shego
Shego 77- Steampunk Shego - Victorian Shego with Copper burning flamethrowers
Shego 0 - No Superpower Shego - Maybe ignored most through high school, never stood out, works at a pet shop in a bad neighborhood

>>2251
Shego 100 - Drakken Shego - Mad scientist with bad global domination ideas
Shego 111 - Skrull Shego - Leader of Earth 111 Skrull army
Shego 115 - Shego Taskmaster
Shego 123 - /d/ Shego - The /d/ of Shego...lazy
Shego 140 - Poacher Shego
Shego 143 - Pirate Shego
Shego 146 - Gladiatrix Shego
Shego 150 - Temperance Shego
Shego 155 - Centaur Shego
Shego 156 - Kitten Shego
Shego 159 - Shego Backslide - A fanfic idea on /co/, I’ll steal it, no one will ever know!
Shego 173 - Cyborg Shego - More like the Borg queen, living head attached to robot body
Shego 222 - Lantern Shego (Red/Orange/Yellow)
Shego 252 - Venom Shego - May or may not be (whipped completely from existence)

..What? No MILF Kim/Shego?

>>2254
That will be Kim and Shego 2. They're inspired by the ones that have DEVIANTAAAART! SCIENCE babies

>>2255
oh, that or Kim/Shego 5

>>2224
Hmm...Vigilante Kim needs a proper name. All I can come up with is Night Stalker

>>2256
I think K&S's mother Kim should be Kim 5.

>>2257
We should try to go for a play-on-words though, like Kim's own name. But what exactly?

>>2259
I picture those two as more of a career woman v. house mom rivalry
also...Kim Justice?

>>2265
>Kim Justice?
Not bad, but see if anything can't think of anything else though. It's good, don't get me wrong.

>>2267
My grammar got shot to Hell there. Sorry.

>>2267
Oh no, trust me, even I nearly face palmed when I said that out loud

Hmm...Red Falcon
Night Stalker
Kim Justice
The Knight Mare...dammit, I blame Wyatt Creed for that
The Enforcer
I'm drowning here folks

>>2270
No offense, but you might want to try asking /co/, back in 4chan. You're going to get a lot more response there than here, I'm afraid.

Endlessly Possible.
Princess Possible
Power Possible
Kim Credable
Social Kim Provement (Okay, that was bad)
Sitch Solver.

>>2251
I thought last night the idea was that Kim Prime had killed her Shego?

>>2277
Using heat vision. After Shego had become President. Then Kim, Ron, and Wade become totalitarian dictators (Rufus being dead at this point).

>>2279
that's the Justice Lords
>>2277
There is no Shego Prime on the list, Shego 0 is equivalent of Kim 0, a BAD END

>>2282
Wouldn't Shego 0 mean that she never became part of the Go team?

>>2283
exactly, no powers, no villainous career, just a series of unimpressive, mediocre events in the life of someone who really doesn't matter

>>2229
I'm liking the idea of Earth-1 Kim making a big deal of her battlesuit, and Stark Kim says "Oh...oh that's just PRECIOUS. Wait right there. Battlesuit...snnrrrrkkk."

Followed by a black-and-orance Iron Kim crashing out of the top window of her penthouse.

>>2287
...that right there, that's happening, I'll find a way to make it so

well a rough draft of the first encounter is done. If artist Anon wants this in a comic form, I'll try to accommodate as best I can

Mr. Zer0, Add me:
Ofunniku at ether gmail.com or live.com

Or just do a search on my name, you'll find me.

if anyone knows personally who this anon artist is, please get her and yes, other anons confirm she's female, to contact me so we can work on this

List update
Kim Prime - Kryptontian Emo-cunt with a simplified anti-monitor suit who’s jealous of all the Kim’s having villains that challenge their skills and condescendingly angry that they’re “doing it wrong” by relying so much on Wade and Ron.
Kim 63 - Ken Possible - Closet bi, leaning more toward girls Ronnie Stoppable
Kim 222 - Green Lantern Kim “One Punch” Jordan (perhaps wears her hair short, somewhat military style)
Kim 252 - Spider-Girl Kim Parker. Preferably ponytail look
Kim 266 - Kim Bane - A government meta warrior who has been enhanced with technology and chemical treatment. The chemical treatment has given her a muscular build and caused her to grow to eight feet in height, a /co/gestion. This Kim will most likely be arrogant, short tempered, and the first to be a real challenge to Kim Prime
Kim 115 - Kim Pool, Armament, SitchPool - Kim Wilson

>>2296
Hey Zer0, drawfag here, was just checking in. You can contact me at meanoak@gmail.com. I've got a bunch more sketches and colour pieces that I'll be posting up tonight, so we can talk then.

>>2299
cool. I was just wondering, if you wanna comic this thing, I can try making a basic storyboard layout though my drawing capacity is equal to that of a retarded chimp

>>2300
Well, I've never done a comic before so our skills are probably equal there. I'll give it a shot, but it might end up more illustrations to go with your story, rather than a full comic. I'll try, though.

>>2302
either way, should be fun

>>2303
....wow....wow umm...on second thought...maybe I should just stick to writing and...delete this work so it can never see the light of day again

https://plus4chan.org/boards/coc/res/2212.html#2216

Stitchpool.

>>2304
What happen?

>>2307
some one set us up the bomb

I've got a handful of new sketches and colour pieces - should I post them here or on /co/?

>>2312
/co/ please. You're going to get a lot more attention there.

>>2313
Right, doing so.

I'm just going to post the pictures here. They don't seem too welcome on /co/ right now.

>>2317
Just a couple of dickheaded trolls. Try again at around midnight or 1:00 am. Most people were enjoying it.

>>2323
That's what I figure - the other threads were very late night threads so I'll just sit it out a few hours and then those of us who care can have at it.

>>2324
Thanks. I've got a couple of ideas too.

D&D Kim - A mythic adventurer. Possibly an elf.
Mad Scientist Kim - Kim as Drakken, basically.

And that's all I have for now, I'm going to go colour these and wait the shitstorm out.

Here's Kim Prime - did I get her right?

Kim drawer from /co/ are you here now? Have the a holes driven you away from /co/?

>>2329
Probably a good idea we love you really. I apologize on behalf of /co/ for your reception.

>>2330
I'm here. I'm still on /co/, I'm just not posting there right now. Waiting for the trolls to get bored.

These are all great, thanks.

>>2317
On friday nights, day /co/ sticks aroudn longer. As you can see, they are a bunch of dicks.

>>2334
It was my bad. I thought posting on a weekend night might be a bad idea, but did it anyway.

>>2335
Don't sweat it. Night /co/ knows your awesome.

>>2329

Maybe give her an S-curl in her hair? Pretty good though.

>>2307
well, I don't have a scanner and drawing with a mouse just...well it was really bad. I'll stick with my strengths. Now that some basic parameters have been set, I can polish the first part of this story but I'm gonna have to find some creative ways to develop it...besides just constant Sitchpool jokes

I'm sorry about what happened there. Some people are just uptight jerks.

>>2338
Oh, alright. You kind of weirded me out with that comment there.

>>2339
for now I'll work on it as a prose. If our gracious artist wants a stab at a comic or someone else with more comic experience would like to, I'll WRITE a storyboard...yes...write...not faildraw

>>2329
great Kim Prime, I love it
>>2320
Hmm..this is the super strong Kim, right? The first to fight Kim Prime?
>>2319
Die Hard Kim? If so, do want!
>>2318
...really wanna know about him, looks like steampunk Drakken

I ended up getting called away from the computer anyway, so I didn't get that much done. But I'm almost done the list of Kims, unless the list gets expanded, so I'll working on finishing and colouring those and uploading them here sporadically through the weekend and then upload the finished folder whenever I finish it.
Last night doesn't bother me, what happened happened. I'm not going to stop because of it.

Zer0, if you can rough up an written outline I can try my hand at the comic; see how it looks, clean it up and we can go from there.

>>2318 is supposed to be Car Dealership Owner 70's Drakken, villain to Blackkim, with the big moustache and bad suit. I guess it doesn't come across that well?

What about an Autobot Kim?

>>2343
There was some suggestions of a second Kim Prime, Optimus style, so that's on the list. What vehicle should she be?

>>2344
most people would say truck but just so i can throw in my opinion, a sports car would probably fit her personality better

>>2342
okay, here's a rough idea for page 1
Panel 1 -Basic outside shot of Bueno Nacho, night time

Panel 2 - Side view of Ron and Kim at a table. Ron eating a burrito, Rufus half buried in nachos, Kim with a salad.
Kim: It’s been pretty quiet lately, Ron. I mean, no Drakken, no Killigan, no world threatening disasters, nothing. You don’t think every criminal on the planet is running scared of us, do you?

Panel 3 - Ron, either taking a bite or point the burrito at Kim with a sly smirk. Rufus gnawing happily on a chip.
Ron: Face it KP, when you’re the tog dog in town, people notice. I’m sure the super villains are just biding their time, working on their A-game but everyone else know better than to mess with us. Ah-Booyah, we rock, we rock hard.

Panel 4 - Kim with a fork in hand. Expression is happy while lost in thought, possibly her eyes looking upward.
Kim: Well, I’m just glad to have some time off. Sometimes I wish there was more of me to go chasing after bad guys.

Panel 5 - Side view from panel 2, characters have a slight shake, including any background character. Kim drops her fork. Ron drops his burrito on his shirt. Rufus falls into the nachos.

Panel 6 - Kim, slightly freak out.
Kim: Did... did you feel that?
Ron: Y... yeah, felt like an earthquake. That or someone tricked out their sound system. Rufus, you okay buddy?

Panel 7 - Rufus half buried in chips with a disoriented look, giving the thumbs off. Speech bubble from off panel
Kim: I’m calling Wade.

Panel 8 - Kim looking into her Kimmunicator
Kim: Wade, you there?
Wade on screen: I was about to call you Kim, this weird tremor knocked me off my chair.

Panel 9 - Kim looking downward with a serious expression
Kim: Wade, something doesn’t feel right about this. There’s never been earthquakes in Middleton. Can you scan for any seismic activity?
Wade from Kimmunicator: ...No way... that’s impossible! I can’t even find a jiggle on the city’s seismograph for the last five minutes!

might I suggest we have a Keyblade Kim?

Quick, rough base sketch for the comic - I split it up into two pages because 9 panels on one page is a little crowded.
How's it look so far? Fix away.

>>2348
Well, KH is Disney. I'll sketch one out.

>>2349
>>2350
Good work.

>>2354
Hey, thanks.

Alright, I'll do a quick update now and then more after dinner.

And an updated Kim Prime, with bonus kitty punching action.

>>2349
>>2350

They look great as roughs, and as proven already your design sketches look wonderfully spot on. I was about to mention make sure you don't have just "enough" room for the text, but the "right" amount of room. I see the spots you've laid out, and I think it's just going to be a little tight for the amount of text but it could work.

Is there any specific reason for the scene to be at night? That to me carries a different connotation than if they were just there after school or something. Twilight seems more appropriate. It could even be colored slightly brooding, foreshadowing and whatnot.

Pg 1, panel 5, her face seems a little off to me.

Pg 2, panel 1, Ron's seat is a little low.

pg 2, panel 3, the top flare of Ron's hair is off, kinda looks like a tendril

I'd love to have been a little closer during the shaking if only to see Rufus about to stumble into the nachos. As it stands, there's an odd disconnect with the amount of information we have that for a moment it seems like he just "appeared" in the nachos. Also a closer up would be nice to see their faces shake. Then we could pull out to the guy in the background whose drink fell.

So when are you going to post in /co/ again? Tonight or tomorrow night, when all the trolls are in bed so they aren't late for school.

...wow
the scenes look great
I love the new sketches
I'm feeling very unimportant right now, kudos

>>2360
Thank you very much for your input! I've never worked on a comic before, so all help is very much appreciated.
I'll fix the models afterwards, but layout wise I quickly added in a top panel just for a closer frame of Kim, Ron and Rufus during the shaking. Hoe does it look, or should I go in closer with seperate panels?

>>2380
I'm thinking Monday night would probably be the best time. I should be done all of the Kims by then and then the brainstorming story-wise can continue from there.

>>2383
Don't feel unimportant, you're the whole story! I'm just the art.

Good lord, I'm trying to draw crippled Kim in a wheelchair and it's the hardest thing ever.

>>2386
well I'm going to try and keep up an interesting story then...gonna have to read up on my steampunk though, not sure what the overall mood for that genre is

>>2394S
Steampunk varies, but it usually has fantasy adventure tones to it.
I'm a little stuck for a colourscheme for Kim Prime - too much blue? Should I add some red?
Also, Kim Stark's iron suit: have her hair out or no?

>>2395
I say the blue is fine, no red but some white on a few parts, maybe arms and legs, to give it some balance.
Also, Iron Kim, I'd say hair in but instead of the Iron Man face, have some semi-transparent screen. She feels like she'd be the kind of ego-centric glory hound to wanna show her face to the cameras after saving the day

>>2395
also, steampunk doesn't have any specific language guidelines, no time specific characteristics? Just modern mechanics using simple methods like steam and springs and gears?

my one critique on the line work is that it's all so very even. It kinda flattens your great drawings. You're using a vector program right? There're lots of ways to fake line variation, but it might be easier and more time friendly if you just used different stroke thicknesses for different parts.

>>2397
To be honest, I haven't seen that much steampunk and most of what I saw was anime, but basically 19th century but with steam-power technology and zepplins. It's usually either adventurous, or dirty/grimdark.

>>2398
I'm using Flash because it's the quickest and easiest for me right now - I'm not too swell on the actual cleanup/inking stage. I'll keep that in mind though, and adjust the lineweight on the rest of the colour pieces, then go back and fix the current ones.

>>2399
hmm...alright, I'll come up with some basic gear for her then. Personality...pleasant with somewhat dated or plain sayings.

>>2400
Yeah, the gear I'm not the best at. I'm still trying to figure out how to make Steampunk Shego work.
I've got a friend who's a big steampunk nerd, I'll ask her for some tech ideas if needed.

>>2401
the biggest thing I think for Steampunk Kim is a heli-pack powered by a gear similar to a steam train engine. I suck at explaining this but a jointed arm powered by steam, rotating a wheel to power the propeller. If that makes sense

>>2402
So, like a backpack with a propeller coming out of it, powered by a crank on the side that Kim needs to turn to get the whole thing moving?

>>2403
I knew i'd screw up. The crank is close...its like...wait
this

>>2404
Nah, it's me that got it wrong. Engineering and machines aren't my forte. I'll research the various machines and try to come up with a better design.

>>2405
no rush, haven't decided where to have her introduced. First batch story wise is Impossible Girl, Spider-Girl, and Sitchpool. So far batch 2 is Funky Black Kim, Nazi and WWII Kim shooting it out, and possibly Jungle Kim at the zoo. I'm leaning toward having Lantern Kim organize them instead of having just one giant cluster

What about something like this? I know the gears aren't showing, but is this closer?

>>2406
Ok, cool. Lantern Kim! I forgot to design a Lantern Kim!

>>2408
if you wanna design a version without the suit on, I suggest a bomber jacket to give her a Hal Jordan feel

>>2409
Hal Jordan. Got it.

Love how this is turning out.

>>2411
hey, I'm creaming my pants here on how great this is turning out.

Few development questions?
1, should there be other, though rare parallel characters like Monique Adam Strange or Ron Plastic Man?
2, given that the Flash has always getting the short end in DC and usually dies, should I continue with a possible idea that'll end up with Speed Kim being beaten to death by Prime?
3, should I post the prose version of this story somewhere? I'm guessing fanfiction.net?

>>2411
>>2412
Haha, I'm having loads of fun with this too.
My scanner's on the fritz now, as it's an ancient thing, so I'll upload the rest of the Kims tomorrow.
Zer0, I look forward to see what else you can come up with.

>>2413
1. I'd say yes, but have them sporadic.
2. Another yes. Since all of Kim Prime's casualties aren't very likeable characters right now (super soldier Kim is kinda cool, but sounds like a douche)
3. Post it here and whereever else you like.

>>2415
>Since all of Kim Prime's casualties aren't very likeable characters right now
don't worry about this one, Speed Kim's going out a hero the way I'm planning it

>>2407
oh wow, can't believe i missed that before. Yeah, that looks perfect, I can really see steampunk Kim flying around with this on with Kim Stark giggling at her while flying in her armored suit

I think there should be at least one pic of Iron Kim saying "REGISTER".

>>2418
Ron Cap was Right

>>2418
She could try to register all the Kims.

This thread's been strangely ignored today.

>>2472
I've been at work and with the family
I'm currently cleaning up the prose version of Kimfinity and the artist will be posting on monday some of her new work.

can we get a enraged hulk kim to take kim prime?

>>2474
well, we already have super kim (Bane Kim) as our powerhouse against Kim Prime...hmmm...but a hulk Kim... would it be better has Bruce Hulk or Jen She Hulk, all permanent and not as uberhax powerful?

Alright, here's Chapter 1 of Kimfinity Crisis in prose form

No matter how many times she has seen it before, Kim will never cease to be amazed at how much Bueno Nacho food Ron can shovel into his mouth in one sitting and never seem to gain any weight. It was disgusting and childishly cute at the same time. While Ron gorged himself on refried beans, proceeded cheese and chemically preserved beef, Kim was happy just to have the salad. “You know Ron, it’s been pretty quiet lately. I mean, no Drakken, no Killigan, no world threatening disasters, not even so much as a pickpocket in Middleton for a week. You don’t think every criminal on the planet is running scared from us, do you?” she asked jokingly.
Ron slurped the grease from his fingers while Rufus gnawed away at the Naco platter. “Face it KP, when we’re the top dogs in town, people notice that. I’m sure the super villains are just biding their time, working on their A-game but everyone else know better than to mess with us. Ah-Booyah, we rock, we rock hard.”
Kim simply rolled her eyes and stabbed another cherry tomato with her plastic fork. “Well, I’m just glad to have some time off. Sometimes it gets so bad, I wish there was more of me to go chasing after bad guys.” As she raised the fork toward her mouth, she suddenly began to shake, causing her to drop her fork. The tremor only lasted for a moment and Kim regained her composure, shocked, but no longer off balance. She looked across the table Ron who had soiled his shirt by dropping his chimarito on it. “Did... did you just feel that?”
Ron tried his best to wipe off the oily mixture of beef and cheese off his clothes. “Yeah, felt kinda like an earthquake or something. You ok Rufus?” Looking down at his hairless friend, Ron was relieved to see that Rufus had merely tripping face down into the Naco and was uninjured from the quake.
The event struck Kim as odd; there are no active fault lines running under Middleton yet a quick look around showed that everyone else felt the sudden tremor but nothing seems to have been knocked over. With her curiosity piqued, she pulled out her Kimmunicator and rang up her favorite underaged genius. “Wade, you there?”
After a quick crackle of the screen, Wade finally appeared, rubbing the side of his head. “I was about to call you Kim, this weird earthquake knocked me off my chair.”
“Wade, something doesn’t feel right about this. Can you scan for any seismic activity?”
Wade did so but his expression was far from comforting. “That’s impossible... according to the seismograph, there’s not even a jiggle in the last five minutes!”
“Then what just hit us? Everyone in Bueno Nacho felt it.”
“I know and now the inbox is swarming with people saying they felt it too, from everywhere! Whatever happened, it happened on a global scale.”
“Well, come on Wade, you’re the super genius, what happened?”
Wade typed furiously and brought up a display on the screen. “Think I found something, massive spike in Earth’s magnetic field. Weird... it didn’t actually change intensity, it didn’t change at all... it’s like something ripped right through it and caused this massive ripple effect. Can’t tell you anything definite at this point.”
“Any chance you know who might’ve caused it?”
“Not a clue. If this was caused by someone, I have no idea who’d be able to do something like this, let alone why. Uh oh, urgent hit. Silent alarm just went off in the Middleton Museum of History.”
Now that was something Kim was more used to. “Thanks Wade, update me on the way.”
“Actually, I already took a peek at their security cameras. It’s the Fashionistas.”
A memory in the back of Kim’s mind popped up when the perps were identified. “There’s a new display of some recently discovered Aztec antiques, including a set of perfectly preserved clothes. I’m guessing ultra retro has gone into style. Too bad they’re going to settle for orange jump suits.”
She pocketed the Kimmunicator and Ron made a soft whine. “Can’t we just call the cops? This really feels more like a police emergency than a teen cheerleader emergency.”
Kim shook her head and pulled him off from his seat, barely giving Rufus enough time to dive into his pocket. “Come on Ron, time to work on our A-game.”

>>2478
Meanwhile, at the Middleton Museum of History. Before they arrived at the museum, the Fashionistas fell into a petty argument and made a wager for tonight’s theft. Each member will find their own way into the museum and the first to grab the Aztec display will keep all the profits after they sell it in the black market. Chino opted to sneak in through the museum’s skyline. Though never considered masculine by his villainous peers, he felt confident that he would beat his female partners to the prize without breaking a sweat. Decked in an outfit worth three times as much as his gear, Chino began working on unhinging the skyline’s windows carefully, unaware that he already tripped a silent alarm. Halfway through his attempt to jimmy one of the hinges off, something whizzed through the air and pinned the sleeve of his top to the skyline’s frame. The sudden shock caused Chino to fall backwards onto his ass, ripping his shirt on the S-shaped blade that punctured through his designer duds. “Ah! Hey! I don’t care if I did steal this shirt, you’re going to pay big time for ruining it, sister!” he cried out to the darkness.
He turned around as he picked himself back up to his feet, looking for whoever assaulted him. Just as he gotten himself up straight, someone was already right behind him, so close that a hot breath brushed uncomfortably across the back of his neck. “Give up or that shirt won’t be the only thing needing stitches.” Chino attempted to attack the stranger only to quickly find himself on the ground with a bloody nose. His vision was blurred after being struck down but he could barely make out a masked woman with red hair before passing out. She handcuffed him to a ventilation pipe and made her way to the skyline. “I’ll be back for you in a bit, pretty boy, after I round up your playmates.”
Back inside, Hoodie had just made her way through the side entrance, hoping to find a shortcut to the exhibit through the various twists and turns of the east side of the museum. Just as she passed the display of an ancient spider idol from an ancient South American tribe, she started to feel as if she was being watched and became suspicious of her surroundings. As she continued toward her prize, she stepped on something on the floor, something sticky. Disgusted, she lifted up her shoe, thinking it was a piece of gum. In actuality, it was something white that looked almost organic. “What the hell is that?”
A second later, she felt something being wrapped around her with enough force to knock her down to the floor. She struggled but her binds would not yield. Taking a second to see what was happening, Hoodie noticed that the binds were the same white material she had just stepped in. As she opened her mouth to yell for help, another glob of the substance was shot over her mouth and a slender female in a red and blue body suit dropped down from the ceiling. As the costumed stranger stood over her, Hoodie furiously yelled out several muffled protests. “A hoodie? What, you hiding a bad hair day or something? You should invest in a mask, lady, and spare us from having to look at that mug of yours,” the newcomer quipped before running off. “I’ll come back for you later, just stick around until then!”
Through the museum’s main hall came Espadrille, opting the direct approach, breaking in through the front door. Little did she know that Kim and Ron were no more than ten steps behind her. Little did they know that they weren’t the only heroes in the museum that night. It didn’t take long for Espadrille to make her way to the Aztec display and it didn’t take long for Kim to sound off while reaching for a gadget. “Not so fast, Espadrille! The only threads you’ll be getting your hands on tonight are prison issue.”
Espadrille snapped her head toward the two teen heroes with a sneer but a sudden glaring light from above blinded the three. A voice booms from the steel rafters above. “You got two choices. We can do this the easy way and you all surrender or we can do this my way.” Kim and Ron had to shield their eyes from the light as Espadrille attempted her escape. She barely got five steps away before their guest from above ensnared her with a set of bolas, sending her into a hard fall toward the floor. “Well, I guess she made her choice, how about you two delinquents?”
Kim stepped forward in a huff, her hand still doing it’s best to shield her eyes from the powerful overhead light. “Delinquents!? Just who do you think you are?”
The stranger jumped down from her concealed position, her red hair flowing behind her unusual black one piece and her face partially concealed by a mask. “I’m Impossible Girl and you two...” There was a pause as Impossible Girl took a good look at Kim’s face. “No way... you! Redhead! What’s your name?” she shouted.
The question struck Kim as extremely odd. “You’re... you’re joking, right? Everyone knows who I am, I’m-”
Just before she could finish, something snagged onto the spotlight Impossible Girl was using and yanked it free from the rafters, causing it to dangle from it’s own power cord. The masked red head quickly found the person responsible; a costumed girl with a long ponytail clinging to a pillar without a harness or any special equipment whatsoever. She was clinging on to the pillar naturally. “Hey lady! Whatcha trying to do with the high beams, blind us?”
Impossible Girl growled and reached for her belt. “Alright smartass, who the hell do you think you are?”
“Me? Oh, I’m just you’re friendly, neighborhood Spider-Girl.”
As the two kept their attention on each other, Kim took the opportunity to reach for her grappling gun to get on equal footing with the two costumed red-heads. As she aimed for a support beam that seemed secure enough, something, or rather, someone fell on her like a sack of potatoes. “Uhh... Sitchpool fall down and go boom. This is weird, I don’t remember falling into a plot hole.”
Seeing Kim felled by this newcomer in red and black caused Ron to cry out in a panic. “Kim!”
At that instance, all four of them were staring at Ron, much to his own surprise. As Kim quickly scanned the other three from her prone position under the masked woman who called herself Sitchpool, she realized what these costumed women had in common. And following in step, the same realization struck the rest of the crimson haired heroines; they were all Kim Possible. Sitchpool was quick to voice her dismay. “Oh, I hope you posers have lawyers because I am SO suing for copyright infringement!”

>>2478
>>2479
I like it.

>>2490
so did I get the character quirks accurate enough? Good pace? Etc.?

>>2491
Well, I'm not the best one to ask such things, but it seemed to capture the show pretty well.

>>2493
not just the show but also the Spiderman and Deadpool mentality, not just cracking wise but how they crack it

Okay, some questions before I continue
1) should Blaxploitation Kim be anti-white, cleaning up the ghetto or something else?
2) This is more for Kimfinity Artist, I'd really like to know a bit more about Super Kim (>>2320) to know how to use her better in the story. Is she supposed to be Bane/Sanctuary Kim or something else?
3) Can you help me come up with a third question?

>>2503
1. She should be against white folk who would keep blacks down. Just tryin' to get equality.

2. The original Sanctuary character I developed had the basic concept that he was cold, unfeeling, calculating, and emotionless. That was actually why he's the only member with cybernetic enhancements and chemical treatment, it would drive a feeling, emotional person insane. His drive to carry out the Sanctuary's ideal is the only reason he can think for himself. For Super-soldier Kim, you could do that and have it so she can't think for herself and only works under orders, since we've cut the Sanctuary plotline from her. Or you could make her more Bane-like and have her be super-agressive with an insatiable drive to smash anything that gets in the way of her or those she works for. Whichever you think would work better.

3. I dunno, lol.

>>2512
Oh, I just realized you were asking about Super Kim and, possibly not, Bane/Super-Soldier Kim. Sorry.

>>2503
1. I've never actually SEEN a blaxplotation, but I think just trying to knock the white folk down a few notches.
2. I didn't really design SuperKim with anything really in mind, I just based her off of the idea of a super soldier strong Kim for Prime to fight. So give her whatever personality you want and I can change her around to fit. I wanted to re-design her anyway.
3. Why don't ducks quacks echo?

And nice job on the story, I like it so far! It flows well.

A better design for Speedy Kim.

And a note: I'm going to be at a concert tonight, last minute, so I'll be offline until about 1am EST or so. So I'm just going to post all that I have done right now and when I come back continue to work/update and take suggestions.

>>2419
"Ron Cap was Right."

I couldn't finish the IronKim "REGISTER" in time, but I did this last night for the hilarity.

And that's the short burst for now - I should be able to finish the roughs of a few more once I get back.
Right now I'm just fixing up a new HellKim, Nazi Kim and WWII Kim, plus these three. There's also the anon requests of Mad Scientist Kim, Mystique Kim and KH Kim - I should be able to get all of those up tonight.

Eh, enough time to squeeze these two in as well.
So, hope the story's continuing to be awesome there, Zer0!

Kim PossiMILF and PregGo.

I'm going to hell for this.

Great work as always. Also, out until 1? Will you be posting that thread in /co/ when you get back or will you save it for tomorrow?

>>2526
Seconded.

alright, thanks for the feedback. Chapter 2 will include Kim Jordan, the Green Lantern, Blaxsplotation Kim who finds the condition of ghetto South Detroit disappointing with blacks selling crack, WWII Kim and Nazi Kim, and SuperSoldier Kim who's a single minded enforcer of a strict code of ethics that makes her over bearing and impossible to reason with

>>2522
You know...for a while, this thought has been in my head since the whole Iron Kim "REGISTER" and Ron Cap was right thing
Kim Stark and Cap Ron as friendly divorcées who got into an argument about registration and letting heroes keep their identity. Pretty soon it gets ugly, friends and partners take side, civil war starts and it ends with Kim pulling an emotional trump card that finally wears down Ron enough to surrender, leading to his assassination. Overwhelmed with guilt, it forces Kim Stark back to drinking but the role of leading the registered heroes gives her no time to grief.

>>2535
>SuperSoldier Kim who's a single minded enforcer of a strict code of ethics that makes her over bearing and impossible to reason with
Ooh, I never considered that one, but I like it. I like it a lot. Good job.

>>2528
I don't want to keep postponing, but I am a little tired and cold now and not in the best mood. But I have tomorrow off, plus no surprise outings, so I'll finish things off, fix some of the pictures I'm less happy with, and fix up the first two pages of the comic. Then post on /co/ with everything done and see where the brainstorms lead us.
10pm tomorrow sound good?

>>2538
fine with me. Always great seeing new work from you, your pace is awe inspiring. I'll keep up with chapter 2, try to make it interesting for everyone

>>2536
Ha, I like it.

>>2539
Hey, thanks. I keep a sketchbook on me, which helps quicken the pace, but overall I've just been drawing so much Kim I'm getting really fast at it.

>>2538
Sounds great. Can't wait.

this is a piece of the upcoming chapter and need a general opinion on how Black Kim is coming along

Kim smirked as she got into a loose, rhythmic stance as the man painfully pulled himself off from the ground. “I think it’s only fair to warn you, turkey, I got a red belt in karate!” Once he was back on his feet, she sent him stumbling back with a fast, spinning kick to his chest. “A brown belt in taekwondo!” Enraged by being humiliated in front of a growing crowd of onlookers, the dealer made a bull rush toward his feminine opponent only to receive a hard kick to the groin by a platform shoe. “And a black belt in ca-razy!”

Chapter 2

On the streets of Detroit, a red head tries to seem inconspicious as she walks along a busy sidewalk. She’s already been stopped a few times, people wanting to see her, to get her autograph. All of them walked away disappointed; it wasn’t her, she’s too old to be her, too mature. This red head in the bomber jacket, she’s not Kim Possible. Close, but not her. After blocks of moving along with this heavy traffic of business people and vapid shoppers, the red haired stranger ducked into an alley and got as deep as she could until she was positive she was alone. Once she was sure of her privacy, she spoke to the green ring on her finger. “This is Lantern 662154 of sector 2814 sending a distress call to any Lanterns listening. I repeat, this is Lantern 662154, Kim Jordan, sector 2814. Please respond, I’m unable to communicate with anyone on Oa, please, someone tell me what the hell is going on!”
No response. Her ring was working but there was simply no response from any other Green Lantern, if any could hear her distress call. “Great... I’m on earth but it’s not earth, Oa seems to be completely wiped from existence as far as this ring can tell and calling my own phone number just connects me to a pizza place. Oh well, at least it was a pizza place in Coast City, just not my Coast City. Actually, what city am I in, anyway? It looks like Detroit but everything else is out of place, can’t risk the surprise. Ring, can you tell me where I am?”
The ring glowed and created a map of the city with two bright blips. “Green Lantern 662154 is in Detroit, Michigan of the planet Earth, sector 2814. Lantern is currently on Shelby Street, Lantern is currently on south side-”
“Hey, wait, hold on a second! You just said I was on Shelby Street.”
“Kim Jordan’s genetic signature has been located in two, three different locations of this city,” was the ring’s response as another blip appeared on the projected map.
“Two more of me running around the city? Better check it out. Ring, what’s your power level?”
“Power levels at eighty-seven percent.”
“Better make it last... I don’t know if I can even get my power battery here.”

In the corner of a vacant lot, down in the south side of Detroit, a local crack pusher was making a sale to a Junior Highschool kid having trouble dealing with his life or so was his excuse. It’s a scene sadly too familiar in this part of the city, blacks destroying the lives of their own kind, but someone wasn’t going to stand for it. A flying trash can lid crashes against the kid’s forearm, causing him to drop the plastic bag of narcotics. “Ya’ll best not be peddlin’ no rock in this neighborhood, that’s for damn sure!” cried out an Afro-sporting, ebony woman wearing somewhat dated threads.
While the scrawny teen cradled his arm as he fled the scene, the dealer pulled out a switch blade. “Bitch, you crazy? Who da hell do you think you are, shittin’ on my business?”
The proud sister put her hands on her bell-bottom bearing hips and held her head up high. “Sucka, you better recognize. I’m Motown’s number one girl, the name’s Kim Possible!”
Her declaration left the thug stunned for a moment. “Wait... hold on, did you say Kim Possible? Bitch, Kim Possible is a white girl!”
“You huffin’ your own powder? I am black, I am proud, and busta, I am ALL woman!”
“Yeah? Well now your gonna be sliced up bitch meat!” The dealer lunges at her, taking a wild swing at her with his blade only to grabbed by his extended arm and flipped to his back with enough force to make him drop his weapon.
Kim smirked as she got into a loose, bouncing stance as the man painfully pulled himself off from the ground. “I think it’s only fair to warn you, turkey, I got a brown belt in karate!” Once he was back on his feet, she sent him stumbling backwards with a fast, spinning kick to his chest. “A red belt in taekwondo!” Enraged by being humiliated in front of a growing crowd of on onlookers, the peddler made a bull rush toward his feminine opponent only to receive a hard kick to the groin by a platform shoe. “And a black belt in ca-razy! If you ever bring that poison back on these streets again, I’mma really show you my bad side.” As the fallen pusher began to crawl away, the crowd began cheering for it’s funky yet outdated heroine of the hour. Kim was more than happy to give a smile and throw up her hands in acceptance. “Thank you, Motown!”
The cheering crowd quickly became a gawking one as they stared skyward in amazement and disbelief. Kim, in turn, looked up into the sky only to be stunned at the sight of a red head surrounded by a green aura descending toward her. “Nice moves and here I thought I’d have to get involved,” quipped the flying masked Kim in the green and black long johns.
The darker Kim gave out a long whistle as her fair skinned counterpart landed. “Now I think I’ve done seen bout most everything when I see a white girl fly.”
Jordan just smiled. “We should talk, girl to girl.”
The formally impressed Kim quickly became defensive. “Oh and why’s that?”
The Green Lantern removed her mask and showed how much alike they were, much to the surprise of Motown’s number one girl. “Because we have a lot in common.”
It took a while for Kim to come back to her senses and then she just let out a friendly smile. “Alright, let’s go hit up a McDonalds, cause this sister is hungry.”

>>2558
A change back to civilian clothes, a short walk and two value meals later, the two Kims began talking about their current situation. “If it makes it any easier on you, you can just call me Jordan or GL.”
Kim cocked up an eyebrow. “GL?”
“Short for Green Lantern, it’s what I am. You know, the whole flying around in green and black tights thing? Actually, before that I was a Colonel for the Air Force, though I was more a test pilot than a solider during peace time. One day I was parachuting down to earth after two of my engines caught on fire and, next thing I knew, this red skinned alien named Abin Sur tells me I have a knack for overcoming great fear and gave me this ring. Fast forward a few years later, I’m sitting in my living room when the whole place started shaking like no tomorrow, I black out and now I’m walking down Detroit.”
The funky femme nodded as she swallowed some fries. “That’s pretty damn cool, girl. Now, I never got no magic Cracker Jack but I fight the good fight myself. One day I just got tired of the pushers, the pimps, and the man keeping the neighborhood down so I did something about it.”
“Sounds like we Kims got something in common and, yes, there’s more than just the two of us around here. My ring said there should be another one in Detroit and I can’t imagine how many more past the city limits.”
“Damn... I guess that makes sense though, that jive pusher said Kim Possible is a white girl. I just thought you were her when you came floating down.”
Jordan just shrugged. “Sorry to disappoint you. It does give me an idea though, maybe we should round up some of the others and visit this local Kim, see if she knows what’s going on.”
“Sounds like a plan to me. By the way, since I’m calling you Jordan and it’s gonna be confusing with some more Kim Possibles around, you can just call me Foxy, cause I am one foxy mama.” Jordan could help but chortle. “What?”
“No, nothing, I’m sorry. It’s just... well you sound like an extra in a Shaft movie.”
Foxy just shook her head. “Whatever, just tell me if I got this down. You want to round up all the other us’es we can, go look up with the main cat calling herself Kim in this scene, have a pow wow and try to get the low down about this big sitch we all in?”
Jordan blinked for a moment and hesitantly nodded. “Uh, yes, I think that’s it. To be honest I only understood about half of that.”
“Solid, let’s kick it fly girl.” It was then that something in Foxy Kim’s belt started to crackle. She pulled out a baby blue device that looked like an old military radio and she listened in on it. “Hey, sounds like two turkeys are laying down heat downtown, we better get down there.”
“I’m all for stopping a gun fight but what the heck is that thing?” Jordan asked, pointing to the strange, bulky device.
“Oh this? It’s a two-way radio and a police scanner, something my man Wade cooked up for me after I pulled his fat out the fryer this one time. Now common, snowflake, let’s do this!”

In the heart of downtown, people screamed and panicked as a fire fight broke out between what some witnesses have claimed were two women in costumes. What they didn’t know is that these two weren’t playing dress up; one of them was truly an officer of the SS and the other, a genuine sergeant of the allied forces. Two women, two different worlds, both with the same person fighting the same war, just on opposite sides. As they took cover, bullets weren’t the only thing these two were shooting at one another. “Give it up, kraut! You got about as much chance of gettin’ hit by lightning than you do putting a bullet in me!” The black clad officer squatted behind a car for cover and barked out an insult in German. “Talk English, you cowardly cyclops!”
The Nazi soldier gnashed her teeth and put a hand on her eyepatch before popping up from cover and squeezed off a few rounds from her luger. “Filthy, Jew-loving degenerate! You stomp your way toward Deutschland and not bother to learn the language? That is just as much insulting as your slur against mine single flaw!”
The army sergeant pressed her back against a building’s column as bullets whiz by, reloading her M1911A1. “Trust me kraut, you got more flaws than I got bullets but I’ll let my firearm do the talkin’ for me!”
The officer of the SS cringed as a windshield implodes from a stray bullet, causing plate glass to shower onto her hat. “That is good because your voice is like many cats being drowned in the lake!”
“Fascist bitch!”
“American whore!”
The two discarded the safety of their protective surroundings and faced each other, weapons drawn, ready to unload every last round in their clips until one of them was dead. Before the first volley could be shot, a green aura encased both weapons and pulled them from their owner’s grip. Jordan just smirked in her Green Lantern suit as she dropped the antique weapons in the middle of the street. “You can take the girls out of the war but you can’t that the war out of the girls, huh? Maybe you two should play nice?”
The two warring soldiers turned to their otherworldly dopplegangers in disbelief. “Mein Gott! I don’t believe it... both of you... erstaunlich!”
“Took the words right outta my mouth, kraut... I just figured you looking like me was just a coincidence... but quadruplets ain’t something I can shrug off as easy...”
Jordan came closer toward the two with Foxy keeping an uneasy eye on both of them. “I know this might sound weird but you are not in your own worlds anymore. Both of you are like us; the same person from different realities. It’s pretty hard to believe but the best thing for all of us to do is band together and find a way to return home.”
The sarge was willing to hear the colonel out but the officer simply made her way for her gun. “I care not for your explanation, I am an officer of Deutschland’s finest and I will not be taking orders from an American and her schwarze companion.”
As she reached for her gun, Jordan projected a green boot to stand on it as she approached the Nazi with an intense look in her eye. “I won’t force you to do anything but I will give you a five cent history lesson before you go. This world is in the twenty-first century, Nazi Germany lost the war, hard, over fifty years ago, all your commanding officers are dead and the world considers Nazis as the lowest form of human life. Now then, are you going to behave and join us or are you going to take your chances on your own in American soil?”
The two exchanged hard looks for a few moments before the officer simply shrugged. “Ja, very well, I’ll go with you. With mine commission with das fuhrer obviously irrelevant at this point, I suppose I’ll go with you if it means returning to mine homeland. You may address me as Frau Possible.”
The sergeant quickly voiced her disapproval of the situation. “Now wait one minute here! You can’t trust her, she’s the enemy!”
Frau Possible simply turned toward the sarge with a lazy, uninterested look in her eye. “I am willing to set aside our differences for the time being as long as our goals are mutually beneficial. I’m not surprised you are unable to muster as much civility.”
The sergeant sneered as the officer smirked smugly. “Fine and I’ll call you Frau, no problem, but I ain’t calling you Possible. You’re not my blood!”
Jordan sighed and shook her head. “Alright, I guess that’s as good as we’re going to get with you two. Now that we’ve got this all settled, our next stop is to find this world’s Kim Possible.”
Foxy threw her head back as she heard Jordan say that. “Finally! I was getting pretty tired of the WWII crew jiving it out.”
From the darkness of an alleyway, the booming sound of a slow, singular applause caught the four Kims’ attention. “Very impressive, very admirable Col. Jordan. I hope you don’t mind me calling you that, since I went through the trouble of reading your lips through the McDonald’s window, I should address you by your proper rank.”
Jordan clenched her fist and her ring began glowing with life. “You’ve been following us? Who are you?”
A figure stepped out from the shadows, a massive figure, nearly eight feet tall and probably twice as wide as any one of them. An ill-fitting coat and a hat hid the stranger’s identity and true figure save for a pair of thick legs in boots. “I am, like all of you, lost in a world not of my own. However, after observing you, I believe this can work.”
“What are you getting at? Are you saying you’re another Kim Possible.”
The stalker laughed, her voice was deep but the familiar Kim tone was there. “Gracious... I have not been called that name in many years. What I am getting at is that perhaps we have all met for a reason. This world seems to hunger for order, a type of order it’s leaders can not deliver. However, four versions of myself, three soldiers and one eager defender of the commonwealth... yes, it can only be destiny. You four shall be the first members of my Sanctuary.”
Jordan pointed her ring directly at the towering woman. “Stop spinning us a yarn and get to the point!”
The giant laughed. “Don’t be so rude, colonel. I simply have a taste for theatrics. Jordan, Foxy, Sarge, Frau Possible. All of you have been wise to choose names to avoid confusion with so many Kims running around.” The large beast of a woman reached for her hat and removed it slowly, revealing the face of a dangerous, powerful woman with black marks etched across her cheeks. “You may call me Rhodes, I am your new leader.”

>>2558
>>2559
I like where this is going.

>>2562
thanks, if you see anything that seems off, please let me know.

>>2390 >>2525
YES! These are great! Thankyou for fulfilling my request! You are a truly badass artist

>>2565
you requested these? Thanks, i can make these work real well later on

>>2565
Hey, no problem. I like filling out these requests, most of these are fun.

And the story's looking good so far, Zer0. My only criticism would be that Nazi Kim should resist joining the others a little more.

>>2526
Housewife KP MILF enough for ya?

>>2567
hmm...I'll work on it, make her standoff against Jordan last longer until it seems she has no other choice but makes it seem she's doing it willingly

>>2570
Yeah, I think that would work better, she seems to give in too easily.
Other than that, I like it. Foxy Kim's hilarious.

>>2571
thanks, I was worried I might have gone too far.

>>2572
I don't think there is a 'too far' with blaxploitation, so you're good.

Great work, as always. Also, it's 10pm. Will you be starting that /co/ thread soon?

>>2574
I'll admit I'm a little nervous about posting in /co/ again

>>2575
I understand, but the regular /co/ public doesn't come here often enough. They need to be shown what they're missing out on.

>>2573ok, how's this (right after Jordan's history lesson)

The two exchanged hard looks and it seemed the daughter of the third Reich was still yet unwilling to yield. “How humorous, I’ve always heard you Americans are a tolerant people but I’ve always known that was a joke. You even treat the schwarzes as badly as we do, men in white hoods if I’m not to be mistaken.”
Foxy stepped forward. “Alright, I think I finally get what that word mean, schwazawhateva, it means black folk, don’t it?”
Frau Kim turned her eyes to Foxy but regarded her with a cold stare. “Yes, it means a black person. A filthy, mud dwelling, lazy, impure ape of Africa. What do Americans call them... ah yes, a nigger.”
That sent Foxy over the edge and she pulled out her pearl-handled pistol, aiming it for Nazi Possible. “Oh that’s it, das uber whitey is going down!”
Quick to prevent any lose of life, Jordan quickly grabbed Foxy’s wrist and pushed it downward till she was aiming at concrete. “Hey, I don’t like this bigot anymore than you do but we’re not killing anyone today.”
A self-satisfied smile painted the SS veteran’s face. “It’s good to see you keeping your little slave girl in line, American.”
Foxy snarled but Jordan aimed her ring an inch from the officer’s face, letting the green energy gather and ebb for her visual experience. “Sister, I can’t kill anyone with this thing but you’d be damned surprised from what you can live through. Now, you either come with us peacefully, no more of the Nazi bull, or I break enough bones to make sure you behave. So what’s it going to be?”
Nazi Kim glared at the ring, than at Jordan’s hard, hateful glare before rolling her eyes with a sigh. “Fine, if it will cease all this drama. I will go with you... for now. And you will address me properly as Frau Possible.”
The sergeant quickly voiced her disapproval of the situation. “Now wait one minute here! You can’t trust her, she’s the enemy!”

>>2577
damnit, eye, only one eye, sorry

>>2576
Alright then, but what would be the best way to start the thread without looking like a drawwhore?

>>2577
Much better! Nazi Kim should be one of the most unlikable.

>>2579
alright, I originally had planned her to be a somewhat tragic character but i'll keep her more hardline bitch until there's an actual reason for her to ever soften up, if any. I'm still basically writing all this by the seat of my pants

>>2579
That's a good question. Let me think...

Wow... just... wow. Kim as Deadpool alone makes this thread full of win

>>2581
Yeah, trying to make a Nazi a sympathetic character isn't a good plan. I'm not object to the idea of a character with a tragic past, mind you, but it isn't going to work with a Nazi.

>>2582
Yeah, cause I think that may have been half the problem last time, so I'm trying to think of a better way of doing it without people crying 'gb2 /coc/'

>>2584
well that's why I was tempted to try. Especially since most Germans that joined Hitler's movement did so after years of living under Europe's thumb after WWI in poverty and degradation

>>2585
don't worry, no matter what we do... we'll still be more accepted than Wyatt Creed

>>2588
Hahaha.
I still can't think of a good way to start the thread though. Just post a picture and the chapters?

>>2589
the chapters will be hard....i did get some positive feed back but it took like 6-7 posts to get the whole thing up

>>2590
How about just the first chapter then? You wanna post it or you want me to do it?

>>2591
hmm...maybe it be faster just to link it to here...if that's possible. Pics is one thing but anons throw the damndest hissy for long prose

actually, I think starting with Sitchpool might work. It will lull their dick-tendencies and make them curious for more

>>2592
But then they'd have to look through the thread for it. A lot of people wouldn't go through the trouble, I'm afraid.

>>2594
hmm...after a few pictures, if they're receptive... then yes but I'm still cautious about this

>>2592
Posted
http://zip.4chan.org/co/res/3365196.html

You wanna post Chapter 2, Zer0? It might be easier for you to do it, and I can just post the pictures.

>>2597
alright

You kick ass, artist. Keep it up.

>>2568
Works for me.
But her counterpart MUST be a pregnant She-Go!
..If only to utilize the resource of the pun with 'Preg-Go' in the context of Soccer Mom passive Aggression battle.

Needs moar Preg-Go! XD

what no
thor-kim?
hulk kim?
cap-kim?
bat-kim?
whore-kim?
clown-kim?
nerd-kim?

Four Kims and one giant Kim. Foxy, Sarge, and Frau Possible were all cautious of this monstrous woman named Rhodes but only Jordan, the Green Lantern, saw what she was past her prodigious exterior. Jordan has seen several hundreds species of sentient life, been to several hundreds of worlds but dictators and warlords all spoke the same language. Right now, Rhodes’ words sounded awfully familiar to Jordan. “Rhodes, let me guess, like the Colossus of Rhodes? The unmoving statue of Helios that watched over the city’s coast?” Jordan asked.
A small smile stretched across the woman’s face. “Col. Jordan, your knowledge of historical trivia is to be commended. Yes, as Helios was built to watch over Rhodes, I was altered to insure that the ideals of the Sanctuary were enforced. One day, when I discovered my superiors were unable to obey the laws of the Sanctuary themselves, I learned the truth. Only I was pure enough, disciplined enough, to uphold the Sanctuary, I was the only one fit to command. So, of course, who better than myself and all of you to see it reborn in this world?”
Frau Kim was dry with her response. “There is only one commander I follow and you do not have the funny, little mustache.”
Jordan Kim kept her ring aimed at Rhodes. “Sorry big girl but I’m not liking where this is all going. Now I don’t know what this Sanctuary thing you keep mentioning is but I have a feeling it doesn’t belong on this world.”
“Col. Jordan, I’m surprised at you. The Sanctuary is merely a way of life, existence without crime, corruption, dishonesty, all under my watchful eye.”
“Right, so what happens to anyone who can’t live up to the Sanctuary brand of law and order? What did you do to your superiors when they proved ‘unable to obey’”.
Rhodes answered plainly and without regret or guilt. “They were broken, by my very hands. It’s the fate of all those who choose depravity over the order of the Sanctuary. After all, a sanctuary is a safe haven, not a den of iniquity.”
Jordan had heard enough. “Alright, tiny, I’ve heard enough. Something tells me you won’t give your grand plan for a perfect world a second thought so I’ll be glad to hold you down until the police get here!”
“But Jordan, I made sure the police will never get here, not in time to stop me anyway. You see, along with being very powerful, I am very cunning and quite resourceful, even in a world not of my own. It was child’s play for me to make local police come to a grinding halt.”
“You’re bluffing.”
“Am I? Why would I lie? You’re all powerless to stop me, why should I fear any you? You should save your energy for more pedestrian heroics such as saving that woman before she falls out of that building,” she said, pointing up to a building behind Jordan. The cold, emotionless tone in her voice made it impossible for Jordan to know whether Rhodes was lying or not. Her sense of duty, to protect all sentient life, got the best of Jordan for a split second, causing her eyes to shift away from the mammoth Kim to see if there was validity to her words. In that instant, after she had bragged about her strength and her intellect, she showed the four how inhumanly agile she was as well by leaping toward Jordan and yanking the ring clear off from her finger. “I stand corrected; now I have nothing to fear from you.”
Rhodes quickly sent Jordan flying to the other side of the street with a single swipe of her open hand. Now that their big gun was disarmed and airborne, the three non-powered decided to take arms. “That’s it ugly, this sister’s about to break you off something proper!” Foxy shouted before unloaded her pistol at Rhodes. The two damsels of the second world war reached for their weapons and followed suit, firing every round they had into the gargantuan gorilla but it seemed all they were doing was putting dents in her face and holes in her coat.
After the last bullet was spent, Rhodes picked a slug off from her flesh and laughed. “Bullets? You honestly thought you could stop me with simple bullets? How disappointing.” She slipped the ring down the front of her armored top and whipped off her coat, her muscular frame in clear sight for all to see. “Now, who wishes to die first?”
Foxy had her fill of condescending white women for one day. “Oh that’s it, I’m about to take your juiced up ass for a ride! Here comes the crazy train, bitch!” Unwilling to believe that this Rhodes was as unstoppable as she claimed to be, Foxy flew straight at her with a kick.
Sadly, her foot bounced her Rhode’s stomach and her ankle was snagged in the giant’s grasp. “Such fire, it will be a shame to break your body but, sadly, such is the fate of all who oppose the way of the Sanctuary.” As she was about to turn Foxy’s leg into a bag of splintered bones, Jordan rammed her elbow as hard as she could into Rhode’s kidney but all it accomplished was a quiet grunt of discomfort. “Ah, colonel. If you were lonely, why didn’t you say so?” Rhodes flung Foxy at Jordan, knocking them both down to the ground. “I will finish you both off later. I think I’ll start instead with the antiques.”
Sarge became very anxious as Rhode turned toward the two warring Kims but Frau seemed indifferent to the giant’s advance. “Alright Frau, looks like that thing’s coming right for us. I hate to seem desperate but you got any bright ideas?”
Frau Kim slowly smiled as she held up a stielhandgranate, a German stick grenade, a live, smoking, stick grenade. “Unlike you Americans, we Germans plan ahead.” She quickly tossed the potato masher at the beast right before making a dive behind a parked car, leaving her allied counterpart exposed and unprepared.
As soon as the grenade reached Rhodes, the fragmentation device exploded literally in her face. The blast was powerful enough to knock Sgt. Kim hard on her back as black smoke obscured the massive monster’s form. “Dammit! You crazy kraut! You almost got me killed!”
The Frau flashed a villainous grin at her fallen acquaintance. “Oh, did my boom-boom give you a boo-boo? Perhaps you American girls are not as well adapt to the battlefield as we German women, ja? Perhaps you should have stayed home and played Rosie Riveter with your whore friends.”
Sarge snarled from her prone position but sharply sucked in a breath as a pain stabbed through her. “I swear, if that bruiser doesn’t do it first, I’m gonna kill you, you rotten fascist!”
The daughter of the Reich simply laughed. “That was top quality Deutschland munitions. There isn’t enough left of her to fill a casket.” As the German Kim confidently rose to her feet to observe the corpse of her fallen foe, she was awe struck and horrified at how alive she still was.
The neckline of her armor was blown asunder, her face bleeding from the various cuts made by the grenade’s flying fragments, black powder and soot stinging at her eyes. Rhodes had become one irate colossus. “You, you dare to defy me? You dare to injure me? I am Rhodes, I am the guardian of the Sanctuary, it’s leader, this world’s destined ruler! You are nothing more than insects compared to me!” Frau Possible quickly ducked back behind the car, hoping for a moment of security but found her efforts fruitless as the big bruiser hoisted the car overhead with little effort. “You can not hide from the hand of peace.”
Just as it seemed that Frau Possible was destined to become a smear on the sidewalk, the two ton vehicle was pulled back from the overbearing titaness’ grip by a green hook on an energy chain. “No!” Rhodes cried out before jerking her head around, barely catching a glimpse of the green light’s regress back into the ring that was once again around it’s true owner’s finger. Clearly, the explosion must’ve jarred the ring from Rhodes’ person.
“People lose the damndest things on the street, don’t you think?” Jordan asked. Rhodes tried to overwhelm Jordan with as much speed and strength as she could muster only to back knocked back by a giant, green fist made of energy. The blow was so immense that it sent Rhodes crashing through a building. “And that’s why they call me One Punch Jordan!”
Foxy and Sarge made their way to Jordan’s side. “Well I’ll be dipped, colonel, you took out that muscle head like she was a lightweight. I thought you said you couldn’t kill folks with that thing.”
Jordan shook her head. “I didn’t kill her and I’m sure she’ll be pretty ornery when she gets back up, sergeant. I think it’s best we withdraw for now and find this world’s Kim.”
The allied solider smiled and stood at attention in the presence of her higher ranked partner. “Yes sir, colonel!”
“It’s Jordan, I haven’t been an active colonel in years. Also, drop the sir.”
Sarge slowly dropped her hand, turning a little red in the face. “Sorry, my commanding officers are all men... force of habit.” As Jordan began to float upward, Sgt. Kim realized they were one Nazi short. “Hey, where’s the kraut?”
Sneaking through an alleyway, Frau Kim was startled as a green claw plucked her up from the ground. “Unhand me! Unclaw me! Whatever the correct saying is for this situation, I demand you return me to the ground!”
Jordan glanced down at the struggling German officer as the other two relaxed in their energy bubble anchored to the ring. “Well, I could do that, leaving you in a city with a giant, unstoppable tyrant-wannabe who you happened to enraged with a grenade to the face or you can stop whining and enjoy the ride.”
With those options, there was little choice to be had. “Can I at least get a bubble?”
“Sorry, bubbles are for allies, sneaky Nazis get the claw.”
“Oh, I hate all of you so very much.”

>>2606
this isn't the entirety of chapter 3, I'm posting it just to get some reactions
1) I'm trying to make Rhodes Kim seem overbearing, confident, and single minded in her idea of a form of government called The Sanctuary. Does she come off well enough or are there things about her needing tweaking?
2) Does the pace of the action feel about right? Comic wise as a first encounter involving 3 non-powered mortals and an arrogant meta-human?
3) Why do I have trouble coming up with a number 3?

>>2607
I kind of liked the idea of her being self-righteous and overbearing, like OOTS's Miko. This just seems like a little too much. That's just me, though.

is this like that one time with everybody being deadpool? or was it the other way around?

>>2609
no no, please, go on. How is she too much

>>2613
Well, when you talked about her earlier, I was expecting someone overly strict and uptight, who only sees the world in black and white, and attacks anyone who doesn't fit her vision of justice.

...Actually, I suppose that fits Rhodes. I was just expecting her to be a fanatical servant of justice, like an extremist paladin, instead of a fanatical tyrant.

>>2619
hmm...i see what you mean. The problem is that not being in her own world, she'd be the only one who would fully understand the Sanctuary. I might've made her a bit super villainy but I guess I let it slide because she could excuse it as eliminating anarchists to her cause. I need to rework this and find a balance of righteous leadership instead of slimy overlord.

I suggest you have Rhodes be a little more... innocent's not the best word, but more 'this is how it should be, why don't you want it this way, guess I'll have to force you' rather than right out force. Does that make sense?

>>2646
Agreed. Also, she should be so uptight that she isn't well liked even on her homeworld.

>>2646
I think i do. More of an "If you insist on belittling the system, I have no choice than to make dull out the appropriate punishment"

>>2648
is this any better?

Four Kims and one giant Kim. Foxy, Sarge, and Frau Possible were all cautious of this monstrous woman named Rhodes but only Jordan, the Green Lantern, saw what she was past her prodigious exterior. Jordan has seen several hundreds species of sentient life, been to several hundreds of worlds but fanatics all usually sing the same song. Right now, Rhodes’ words sounded awfully familiar to Jordan. “Rhodes, let me guess, like the Colossus of Rhodes? The unmoving statue of Helios that watched over the city’s coast?” Jordan asked.
A small smile stretched across the woman’s face. “Col. Jordan, your knowledge of historical trivia is to be commended. Yes, as Helios was built to watch over Rhodes, I was... altered to insure that the ideals of the Sanctuary were enforced. I take great pride in my role and I wish to continue my work even here. Though I’m not much for bureaucracy, I’m afraid I have little choice but to become the Sanctuary’s new master attendant. I’m simply glad I was able to find such ideal agents for the Sanctuary in a single city. Please, join my cause and we’ll bring peace and order to this world.”
Frau Kim was dry with her response. “There is only one commander I follow and you do not have the funny, little mustache.”
Jordan Kim kept her ring aimed at Rhodes. “Sorry big girl but I’m not liking where this is all going. Now I don’t know what this Sanctuary thing you keep mentioning is but I have a feeling it doesn’t belong on this world.”
“Col. Jordan, I’m surprised at you. The Sanctuary is merely a way of life, existence without crime, corruption, dishonesty, all under our watchful eyes. You seriously aren’t saying that you approve of the disorder choking this world, do you?”
“I’m not saying anything, what you’re saying is that you want to overthrow this world’s legal system to install your own. Tell me, what happens to people who don’t get with the program?”
Rhodes answered plainly and without regret or guilt. “Though there are, of course, varying degrees of punishment according to the severity of the infractions, resistance to the Sanctuary is punishable by death. It’s the only way to maintain peace.”

>>2654
Better.

>>2657
thanks, i'll keep up this version then
also, should Kim Stark sell weapon patents to rebuild her fortune?

ok, here's the same scene redone

Four Kims and one giant Kim. Foxy, Sarge, and Frau Possible were all cautious of this monstrous woman named Rhodes but only Jordan, the Green Lantern, saw what she was past her prodigious exterior. Jordan has seen several hundreds species of sentient life, been to several hundreds of worlds but fanatics all usually sing the same song. Right now, Rhodes’ words sounded awfully familiar to Jordan. “Rhodes, let me guess, like the Colossus of Rhodes? The unmoving statue of Helios that watched over the city’s coast?” Jordan asked.
A small smile stretched across the woman’s face. “Col. Jordan, your knowledge of historical trivia is to be commended. Yes, as Helios was built to watch over Rhodes, I was... altered to insure that the ideals of the Sanctuary were enforced. I take great pride in my role and I wish to continue my work even here. Though I’m not much for bureaucracy, I’m afraid I have little choice but to become the Sanctuary’s new master attendant. I’m simply glad I was able to find such ideal agents for the Sanctuary in a single city. Please, join my cause and we’ll bring peace and order to this world.”
Frau Kim was dry with her response. “There is only one commander I follow and you do not have the funny, little mustache.”
Jordan Kim kept her ring aimed at Rhodes. “Sorry big girl but I’m not liking where this is all going. Now I don’t know what this Sanctuary thing you keep mentioning is but I have a feeling it doesn’t belong on this world.”
“Col. Jordan, I’m surprised at you. The Sanctuary is merely a way of life, existence without crime, corruption, dishonesty, all under our watchful eyes. You seriously aren’t saying that you approve of the disorder choking this world, do you?”
“I’m not saying anything, what you’re saying is that you want to overthrow this world’s legal system to install your own. Tell me, what happens to people who don’t get with the program?”
Rhodes answered plainly and without regret or guilt. “Though there are, of course, varying degrees of punishment according to the severity of the infractions, resistance to the Sanctuary is punishable by death. It’s the only way to maintain peace.”
Jordan had heard enough. “Alright, tiny, I’ve heard enough. If there’s one thing I don’t believe in, it’s corporal punishment, especially from a giant thug with a master plan! I’m sorry but I’m afraid I’m gonna have to ask you to stand down.”
Rhodes’ eyes lowered into a cold glare. “You resist the way of the Sanctuary? You go against peace and order for this world’s imperfection?”
“You’re not overthrowing this world to implement your way of thinking. We’re guests here, not invaders.”
“I am severely disappointed, I wanted us to be allies but you obviously choose to be my enemy. No matter, if I must bare the burden of a secure world alone, so be it. Ask for you, Col. Jordan, you will be a fine example to all those who oppose the Sanctuary.”
Jordan used her ring to will a green straightjacket around the behemoth. “Not today, Rhodes. Now then, how about you just relax until the police come?”
Rhodes continues to glare into Jordan’s eyes but now it felt as if something was disruption the Lantern’s concentration. “Are you feeling queasy, Col. Jordan? Along with a sharp mind and a powerful body, the attendants of the Sanctuary altered my body chemistry, bestowing onto me other great gifts such as the ability cloud the minds of the wicked.” Jordan tried to look away but whatever Rhodes was doing to her mind, it broke her concentration to lose control of her power. With a might show of physical strength, Rhodes broke free of the energy restraint with so much force it destroyed her ill-fitting coat, showing her true, massive form and her strange one-piece suit. With a speed that matched such inhuman strength, Rhodes quickly descended upon Jordan before she could snap herself back together and yanked the power ring clear from her finger. “Now, how sure are you without your ring?”
Rhodes quickly sent Jordan flying to the other side of the street with a single swipe of her open hand. Now that their big gun was disarmed and airborne, the three non-powered heroines decided to take arms. “That’s it ugly, this sister’s about to break you off something proper!” Foxy shouted before unloaded her pistol at Rhodes. The two damsels of the second world war reached for their weapons and followed suit, firing every round they had into the gargantuan gorilla but it seemed all they were doing was putting dents on her bearskin.
After the last bullet was spent, Rhodes picked a slug off from her flesh and sneered at the others. “Bullets? You dare fire upon me with bullets?” She slipped the ring down the front of her unusual outfit and began advancing toward the trio. “Very well, who wishes to die first?”
Foxy had her fill of uppity white women for one day. “Oh that’s it, I’m about to take your juiced up ass for a ride! Here comes the crazy train, bitch!” Unwilling to believe that this Rhodes was as unstoppable as she claimed to be, Foxy flew straight at her with a kick.
Sadly, her foot bounced her Rhode’s stomach and her ankle was snagged in the giant’s grasp. “Such fire, such emotion. Truly, you above the others had the most potential. Sadly, I must break you for your defiance.” As she was about to turn Foxy’s leg into a bag of splintered bones, Jordan rammed her elbow as hard as she could into Rhode’s kidney but all it accomplished was putting a strain on her elbow. “Ah, colonel. You still wish to fight me, even without your toy?” Rhodes flung Foxy at Jordan, knocking them both down to the ground. “I will deal with you two in a bit. I think I’ll start instead with the antiques.”
Sarge became very anxious as Rhode turned toward the two warring Kims but Frau seemed indifferent to the giant’s advance. “Alright Frau, that thing’s coming right for us. I hate to seem desperate but you got any bright ideas?”
Frau Kim slowly smiled as she held up a stielhandgranate, a German stick grenade, a live, smoking, stick grenade. “Unlike you Americans, we Germans plan ahead.” She quickly tossed the potato masher at the beast right before making a dive behind a parked car, leaving her allied counterpart exposed and unprepared.
As soon as the grenade reached Rhodes, the fragmentation device exploded literally in her face. The blast was powerful enough to knock Sgt. Kim hard on her back as black smoke obscured the massive monster’s form. “Dammit! You crazy kraut! You almost got me killed!”
The Frau flashed a villainous grin at her fallen acquaintance. “Oh, did my boom-boom give you a boo-boo? Perhaps you American girls are not as well adapt to the battlefield as we German women, ja? Perhaps you should have stayed home and played Rosie Riveter with your whore friends.”
Sarge snarled from her prone position but sharply sucked in a breath as a pain stabbed through her. “I swear, if that bruiser doesn’t do it first, I’m gonna kill you, you rotten fascist!”
The daughter of the Reich simply laughed. “That was top quality Deutschland munitions. There isn’t enough left of her to fill a casket.” As the German Kim confidently rose to her feet to observe the corpse of her fallen foe, she was awe struck and horrified at how alive she still was.
A section of her outfit was blown asunder, her face bleeding from the various cuts made by the grenade’s flying fragments, black powder and soot stinging at her eyes. Rhodes had become one irate colossus. “You, you to continue this defiance? You dare to rebel against the Sanctuary? I have endured your impertinence long enough! If you stand against the Sanctuary, you must die!” Frau Possible quickly ducked back behind the car, hoping for a moment of security but found her efforts fruitless as the big bruiser hoisted the car overhead with little effort. “You can not hide from the hand of peace.”
Just as it seemed that Frau Possible was destined to become a smear on the sidewalk, the two ton vehicle was pulled back from the overbearing titaness’ grip by a green hook on an energy chain. “No!” Rhodes cried out before jerking her head around, barely catching a glimpse of the green light’s regress back into the ring that was once again around it’s true owner’s finger. Clearly, the explosion must’ve jarred the ring from Rhodes’ person.
“People lose the damndest things on the street, don’t you think?” Jordan asked. Rhodes tried to overwhelm Jordan with as much speed and strength as she could muster only to back knocked back by a giant, green fist made of energy. The blow was so immense that it sent Rhodes crashing through a building. “And that’s why they call me One Punch Jordan!”
Foxy and Sarge made their way to Jordan’s side. “Well I’ll be dipped, colonel, you took out that muscle head like she was a lightweight. I thought you said you couldn’t kill folks with that thing.”
Jordan shook her head. “I didn’t kill her and I’m sure she’ll be pretty ornery when she gets back up, sergeant. I think it’s best we withdraw for now and find this world’s Kim.”
The allied solider smiled and stood at attention in the presence of her higher ranked partner. “Yes sir, colonel!”
“It’s Jordan, I haven’t been an active colonel in years. Also, drop the sir.”
Sarge slowly dropped her hand, turning a little red in the face. “Sorry, my commanding officers are all men... force of habit.” As Jordan began to float upward, Sgt. Kim realized they were one Nazi short. “Hey, where’s the kraut?”
Sneaking through an alleyway, Frau Kim was startled as a green claw plucked her up from the ground. “Unhand me! Unclaw me! Whatever the correct saying is for this situation, I demand you return me to the ground!”
Jordan glanced down at the struggling German officer as the other two relaxed in their energy bubble anchored to the ring. “Well, I could do that, leaving you in a city with a giant, unstoppable tyrant-wannabe who you happened to enraged with a grenade to the face or you can stop whining and enjoy the ride.”
With those options, there was little choice to be had. “Can I at least get a bubble?”
“Sorry, bubbles are for allies, sneaky Nazis get the claw.”
“Oh, I hate all of you so very much.”

>>2659
Yeah, that works better. Although the mind-warp thing is a little weird, I prefered the tricking Jordan Kim to to look away from your other version. But this works too.

>>2661
well, the tricking thing worked well with the other Rhodes. Trying to make her more paladin like, I needed something less dishonest for her to distract Jordan. Also, might make an interesting thing to use in the fight against Prime

>>2662
You know I like what you're doing, but do you think you could come up with another name for the group she works for? I don't want to seem rude, but I was kind of hoping to get rid of all mention of Sanctuary, since I intended to use it in a story of my own.

>>2671
sorry, it jsut stuck to my head
alright, I'll think of another name for it, sorry.

>>2672
Hey, it's cool. Just keep up the good work.

>>2674
I think this is all i can muster for now

Back in Middleton, after a long night of explanations and moments of awkwardness, Kim, Impossible Girl, who’s name was also Kim Possible, Kim Parker, the incredible Spider-Girl, and Kim Wilson, the madam with a mouth called Sitchpool, all sat around the native Kim’s room to try and figure out what to do about the sitch they were in. Except Sitchpool, who found herself more interested in rummaging through Kim’s closet than actually discussing anything. “You know, I’m a scientist myself but I’m more about biochem than multi-dimensional travel,” declared Kim Parker, who. without her mask. looked exactly like the native Kim save for a preference in wearing her hair in a ponytail.
“I’ve seen some pretty weird stuff where I come from, even know an alien or two. But this is far beyond anything I can comprehend,” admitted Impossible Girl. She looked more like a slightly older Kim, perhaps mid-to-late-twenties with a face harden by an unhappy life.
Kim sighed in despair. “All Wade can come up with is a temporary distortion in the earth’s magnetic field. He’s not even sure how that relates to you all being here.”
Parker laid back on the carpet and looked up to the ceiling. “Well, maybe we should ask some professionals. You know, someone who might know about this kind of stuff? Don’t get me wrong, I like you girls but I can’t risk losing my apartment because I was in another reality when the rent’s due.”
Sitchpool abruptly burst forth from the closet, wearing only Kim’s cheerleading outfit and her mask pulled up half way over her face. “Hey, we wear the same size!” she declared.
The other three were disgusted beyond words; Sitchpool’s flesh was a disgusting display of lesions, folds, boils and things none of them wished to ever see again in their lives. “Kimmie, visitor for you!” daddy Dr. Possible called out from downstairs.
“Oh thank God!” Kim cried out before bolting through the door before Sitchpool entertained Parker and Impossible Girl with a high kick routine sans underwear. Downstairs, as Kim finally regained composure from the horror show that was Kim Wilson, she approached the front door as a familiar looking woman in a bomber jacket waited anxiously. Kim was surprised to see another one of the alternate Kims at the door, surprised, not shocked. “Well, I guess there’s more than just three of you, huh?”
Jordan was caught off guard with that statement. “You mean there’s more? You’ve met them?”
“One of them is wearing my cheerleading clothes. Please, come in.”
Jordan gave an uncomfortable smile and stepped aside. “Actually... I didn’t come alone.”
Kim’s jaw fell agape as she saw the other three. Thousands of questions rushed through her head but Kim could only think of one thing to say. “I guess I better order delivery for lunch.”

>>2676
Looking good.

>>2677
thanks. I wanna include more Kims so next chapter is going to be a side story not including any of the 9 Kims featured so far.
Also, I won't be back for a few hours so any suggestions for replacing Sanctuary will be appreciated, all I can think of is "The Order" the most vanilla name ever.

One More Thing, Here's some Power Girl Kim from the successful thread on /co/, the artist's speed and quality of these sketches is a wonder to behold

>>2678
How about making it her world's version of Global Justice?

>>2678
Cerberus?

>>2678
The Order of _______

Where the blank is either a name, or if you want to be simpler, a number.

>>2686>>2685
The Order of Cerberus?

>>2695
Maybe, but I still like my idea of making it Global Justice.

>>2696
Alright, Global Justice it is, taking a stab at definite order by becoming an overt police force with it's own superhuman enforcer

>>2698
ok, every post is a repost repost. Now Sanctuary is replaced by Global Justice, G.J.

Four Kims and one giant Kim. Foxy, Sarge, and Frau Possible were all cautious of this monstrous woman named Rhodes but only Jordan, the Green Lantern, saw what she was past her prodigious exterior. Jordan has seen several hundreds species of sentient life, been to several hundreds of worlds but fanatics all usually sing the same song. Right now, Rhodes’ words sounded awfully familiar to Jordan. “Rhodes, let me guess, like the Colossus of Rhodes? The unmoving statue of Helios that watched over the city’s coast?” Jordan asked.
A small smile stretched across the woman’s face. “Col. Jordan, your knowledge of historical trivia is to be commended. Yes, as Helios was built to watch over Rhodes, I was... altered to insure that the ideals of Global Justice were enforced. I take great pride in my role and I wish to continue my work even here. Though I’m not much for bureaucracy, I’m afraid I have little choice but to become Global Justice’s new master director. I’m simply glad I was able to find such ideal agents for G.J. in a single city. Please, join my cause and we’ll bring peace and order to this world.”
Frau Kim was dry with her response. “There is only one commander I follow and you do not have the funny, little mustache.”
Jordan Kim kept her ring aimed at Rhodes. “Sorry big girl but I’m not liking where this is all going. Now I don’t know what this Global Justice thing you keep mentioning is but I have a feeling it doesn’t belong on this world.”
“Col. Jordan, I’m surprised at you. Global Justice is merely a new path of law and order, a world without crime, corruption, dishonesty, all under our watchful eyes. You seriously aren’t saying that you approve of the disorder choking this world, do you?”
“I’m not saying anything, what you’re saying is that you want to overthrow this world’s legal system to install your own. Tell me, what happens to people who don’t get with the program?”
Rhodes answered plainly and without regret or guilt. “Though there are, of course, varying degrees of punishment according to the severity of the infractions, resistance to Global Justice is punishable by death. It’s the only way to maintain peace.”
Jordan had heard enough. “Alright, tiny, I’ve heard enough. If there’s one thing I don’t believe in, it’s corporal punishment, especially from a giant thug with a master plan! I’m sorry but I’m afraid I’m gonna have to ask you to stand down.”
Rhodes’ eyes lowered into a cold glare. “You resist the path to prosperity? You go against peace and order for this world’s imperfection?”
“You’re not overthrowing this world to implement your way of thinking. We’re guests here, not invaders.”
“I am severely disappointed, I wanted us to be allies but you obviously choose to be my enemy. No matter, if I must bare the burden of a secure world alone, so be it. Ask for you, Col. Jordan, you will be a fine example to all those who oppose Global Justice.”
Jordan used her ring to will a green straightjacket around the behemoth. “Not today, Rhodes. Now then, how about you just relax until the police come?”
Rhodes continues to glare into Jordan’s eyes but now it felt as if something was disruption the Lantern’s concentration. “Are you feeling queasy, Col. Jordan? Along with a sharp mind and a powerful body, the head scientists of G.J. altered my body chemistry, bestowing onto me other great gifts such as the ability cloud the minds of the wicked.” Jordan tried to look away but whatever Rhodes was doing to her mind, it broke her concentration to lose control of her power. With a might show of physical strength, Rhodes broke free of the energy restraint with so much force it destroyed her ill-fitting coat, showing her true, massive form and her strange one-piece suit. With a speed that matched such inhuman strength, Rhodes quickly descended upon Jordan before she could snap herself back together and yanked the power ring clear from her finger. “Now, how sure are you without your ring?”
Rhodes quickly sent Jordan flying to the other side of the street with a single swipe of her open hand. Now that their big gun was disarmed and airborne, the three non-powered heroines decided to take arms. “That’s it ugly, this sister’s about to break you off something proper!” Foxy shouted before unloaded her pistol at Rhodes. The two damsels of the second world war reached for their weapons and followed suit, firing every round they had into the gargantuan gorilla but it seemed all they were doing was putting dents on her bearskin.
After the last bullet was spent, Rhodes picked a slug off from her flesh and sneered at the others. “Bullets? You dare fire upon me with bullets?” She slipped the ring down the front of her unusual outfit and began advancing toward the trio. “Very well, who wishes to die first?”
Foxy had her fill of uppity white women for one day. “Oh that’s it, I’m about to take your juiced up ass for a ride! Here comes the crazy train, bitch!” Unwilling to believe that this Rhodes was as unstoppable as she claimed to be, Foxy flew straight at her with a kick.
Sadly, her foot bounced her Rhode’s stomach and her ankle was snagged in the giant’s grasp. “Such fire, such emotion. Truly, you above the others had the most potential. Sadly, I must break you for your defiance.” As she was about to turn Foxy’s leg into a bag of splintered bones, Jordan rammed her elbow as hard as she could into Rhode’s kidney but all it accomplished was putting a strain on her elbow. “Ah, colonel. You still wish to fight me, even without your toy?” Rhodes flung Foxy at Jordan, knocking them both down to the ground. “I will deal with you two in a bit. I think I’ll start instead with the antiques.”
Sarge became very anxious as Rhode turned toward the two warring Kims but Frau seemed indifferent to the giant’s advance. “Alright Frau, that thing’s coming right for us. I hate to seem desperate but you got any bright ideas?”
Frau Kim slowly smiled as she held up a stielhandgranate, a German stick grenade, a live, smoking, stick grenade. “Unlike you Americans, we Germans plan ahead.” She quickly tossed the potato masher at the beast right before making a dive behind a parked car, leaving her allied counterpart exposed and unprepared.
As soon as the grenade reached Rhodes, the fragmentation device exploded literally in her face. The blast was powerful enough to knock Sgt. Kim hard on her back as black smoke obscured the massive monster’s form. “Dammit! You crazy kraut! You almost got me killed!”
The Frau flashed a villainous grin at her fallen acquaintance. “Oh, did my boom-boom give you a boo-boo? Perhaps you American girls are not as well adapt to the battlefield as we German women, ja? Perhaps you should have stayed home and played Rosie Riveter with your whore friends.”
Sarge snarled from her prone position but sharply sucked in a breath as a pain stabbed through her. “I swear, if that bruiser doesn’t do it first, I’m gonna kill you, you rotten fascist!”
The daughter of the Reich simply laughed. “That was top quality Deutschland munitions. There isn’t enough left of her to fill a casket.” As the German Kim confidently rose to her feet to observe the corpse of her fallen foe, she was awe struck and horrified at how alive she still was.
A section of her outfit was blown asunder, her face bleeding from the various cuts made by the grenade’s flying fragments, black powder and soot stinging at her eyes. Rhodes had become one irate colossus. “You, you to continue this defiance? You dare to rebel against Global Justice? I have endured your impertinence long enough! If you stand against law and order, you must die!” Frau Possible quickly ducked back behind the car, hoping for a moment of security but found her efforts fruitless as the big bruiser hoisted the car overhead with little effort. “You can not hide from the hand of peace.”

It's looking good, Zer0. Global Justice works better than Sanctuary in the context of this story.