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>>96825 Nice story! Though I doubt some parts of it (e.g., the characters' thoughts) could be safely converted into a graphic medium. But that's OK, since non-comic write/drawfaggotry is welcome here as well! Keep it up!
Oh and btw, a minor note, if I may. Personally, I would like it even more if the depiction of internet were closer to Serenity!canon: remember, that corny graphic interface chat with chibi avatars? :) (Though I'd keep the screen names from your story, anyway) But that may be just me, of course; I like my porn canon-faithful :)
>>96828 Don't be so quick to judge. Lesbian porn is full of surprises, etc etc :)
>If we're talking full-on degradation/depravity/netorare/etc Hm. I'm personally okay with stories like these (I'm a rather perverted person, lol), but I guess we need other fa/pco/mrades' opinions on this matter, since I've met a lot of people who aren't comfortable with that kind of porn :(
As a matter of fact, if the opinions were too split, we could even create two different stories - one soft and lesbian, the other perverted and full-on depraved. And I would fap to both :D
>>96829 Heh, that's why we're all here in this topic, lol :)
Actually, for me it's more like >Something incredibly hot about a goody-goody (any kind of) girl turning into a (any kind of) slut.
>>96861 >>96866 I know what you mean. It's lazy writing when any person in the story suddenly becames "lol bi" regardless of their biography, psychology, upbringing, sexual preferences etc.
But what if a person who thinks of themselves as straight, would be seduced into a homosexual one-night stand by a combination of moral confusion, peer pressure, alcohol/light drugs, and a charismatic and insistent seducer? Could happen. And would be hot, imho, if written well.
As for the characters and their sexual preferences... let's see: >Serenity Likes cock, sure. But she had a shady past, and we don't know what that shady past included. So she may be bi, with a preference for males. Besides, if we made her 100% straight, that would mean abandoning any hope of Lori's lesbian feelings to her evolving into anything more than unrequited love or rape. And that would be sad :(
>Lori Lesbian. I guess, 100% lesbian, even. She lusts over Serenity, but maybe she'll try to seduce some other girls, as well? She wasn't against spending a night-out with Sally in the original comic, for example...
>Sally Well, she's a cute cheerful loli virgin who's never even kissed, and a conservative father who watches here every move and grounds her for wanting to wear a costume with bare knees. She's like, the perfect corruption material. Doesn't matter which corruption, imho - straight, lesbian, bi, group, or all of the above :) Maybe we can also explore the possibility of her father molesting her? It's pretty plausible, imho - his wife is paralyzed from the waist down, and he's pretty jealous of Sally wearing anything more revealing than a nun's habit for her friends. Though, if we decide to explore this scenario, I'd like to ask not to make it the only (or the first) Sally's porn scene, since I don't really care for incestous rape/molestation.
>Kim I agree, she look predominantly straight (and for that matter, predominantly monogamous). But, well, the only person she could interact besides Derek - is Serenity. Yeah, hatesex is cliche, but cliches can be fappable, too :) Of course, there's also her father, who's also their Prayer Club leader.
>Derek He's straight for Kim. As other possibilities - there's Kim's mother (come on, we can't have a no-holes-barred depraved material without at least some MILF). There's also his stoner friend (is his name Willy? I thought he was called Terry, lol) - and we would have probably the only plausible gay pairing in this comic!
>Eddie Omnisexual :D He could also be in some of the more "perverted" acts, like BDSM (as both a maledom and a malesub), voyeurism, etc. etc. He's just fits the "sleazy pervert" stereotype too well :)
>Tim Dunno about him, really. He looks like a socially stunted person, to me, and I dunno what to make of him. Maybe he could be the "socially stunted guy, but has a huge cock, and thus the ladies flock to him" stereotype? That'd make him a double stereotype! :D (with the "all black men have huge cocks" included)
There's also this problem. What fetishes would our characters get *after* they become depraved sluts? BDSM (sub or dom)? Exhibitionism? What perverted things could they start doing? Maybe someone starts to seduce random people in church? Someone could Or someone else could become a stripper, or even a prostitute? Who would get which fetish / do which thing?
>>96864 >>96866 Both scenarios for Serenity are OK. But this leads us to the need to define Serenity's character? Is she the same "bad girl", who has just donned a guise of a "good girl" to have a better chance of escaping other characters' religious clutches and "corrupting" them? Or is she really a reformed person, who becomes more saint than the Pope, while other characters start slowly corrupting (like in Serenity #10, when Kim decides to dress slutty)?
>>96865 Haha, that's funny :) And pretty hot. But... a bit short :) Keep it up!
--- Sorry for the tl;dr post :)
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